备战2016中考-写作达人之结构表达法

两篇我去年带过的学校的优秀作文，都是按我所讲去写的 一 假如学生正在开展“争当文明中学生”的主题活动。请以“To be a polite student”为题，写一篇短文，要求： 语意连贯，80词左右。 To be a polite student As a student, it’s very important for us to be polite. How can we be polite students? I would like to give you some advice. At first, we should respect our teachers. For example, we need to say “Hello” when we meet our teachers and listen to them carefully in class. Second, we should help people who are in trouble in time. We can help our classmates work out the problems. Then, we must obey the traffic rules. We should stop when the light is red. Finally, protecting the environment is also our duty. Don’t drop the litter anywhere. If we can try our best to do these things, the world will be more colorful and beautiful. 二 音乐有各种形式，音乐存在于生活的各个方面。人们高兴时听音乐，不高兴时也听音乐。音乐可以令人振奋，音乐可以令人放松，请以What do you think of music? 为题写一篇80词左右的短文。 What do you think of music? Everyone has his or her favorite music. As we know music is very important in our lives. It can influence our behavior and our hands. But it also has advantages and disadvantages. Listening to music can make us relax. When you feel tired, light music can help you a lot. And listening to music can improve our EQ. But if you listen to music for a long time, your ears will have some problems. Some teenagers often listen to music when they are doing homework. It’s a very bad habit and it’s bad for their grades. Music is really important in our life. I think if you can listen to music in a right way, you will become a successful and wise people.